"The desire of corporations to maximize profits creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large. "
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations or reading.
Firstly I strongly agree with the point that has been addressed above. Yes the evolution of modern culture has given growth to these kind of circumstances wherein lots and lots of people feel very tough to survive this world. This idea is mainly suitable to those of lower and middle class,higher class people won't mind much about it. The Government has the motto "For the people By the people To the people" but those are just for words sake,they do not follow these words.
Secondly let us take an instance,there are lot of private educational institutions and hospitals being established nowadays which in turn reduced the number of Institutions and hospitals controlled by government itself. In general this makes people too reliant on private hospitals and governments. All these private sector give huge lumps of money as commission to government, whereas what is the situation of people who can't afford that such money? They become fooled by government.
Nowadays the rural areas are all been transformed to urban areas,reason given by the government is that it is evolution of modern culture and development. Just imagine the other side of this urbanization, lots and lots of farmlands and cultivable lands are being demolished bu multi corporate. Farmers and people who are largely dependent on occupation related to farming etc become unemployed. All sort of things which we cook and consume are largely dependent on cultivation.These all sort of things lead to the increase in rates of grains and other essential food items.
In point of view Government should work only for people,any kind of development must be done only with the permission of people. Lot and lots of natural calamities takes place because of some of the foolish and dumb activities of corporation. Example: Deforestation,Floods etc.
Deforestation has become more popular nowadays wherever we go we could notice people cutting trees, atleast this one is valid to some extent but in some cases government getting money from certain group of people and giving permission to demolish the forest which has literally reduced the rain and resulted in water scarcity.
On the other side Yes I accept we need development Yes but meanwhile those sort of developments should not affect anyone or any professionals. The nation's primary concern should always be giving best thing to people and nurture them with their needs. Instead of doing these kind of developments by getting money for corporate and private sectors they could well focus in developing the poor and needy. Every nation has lot of poor people who die out of poverty. There are people who cant afford even for one meal,lots die out of hunger.So the nation's main focus must be educating them and abolishing the poverty.The saturation level should be reached beyond which no one has poverty anymore.
So I conclude that the Nation should always work for people its focus should not be on money or other kind of things it's focus must always be giving better and best things in all aspects to every citizen of that nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
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...t we need development Yes but meanwhile those sort of developments should not affect anyon...
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Line 10, column 189, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'giving the best'.
Suggestion: giving the best
...ations primary concern should always be giving best thing to people and nurture them with t...
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...them with their needs. Instead of doing these kind of developments by getting money for co...
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Suggestion: So
...ven for one meal,lots die out of hunger.So the nations main focus must be educatin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, while, in general, kind of, sort of, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2576.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 507.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0808678501 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74517233601 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80260796003 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.500986193294 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 801.0 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3000712242 60.3974514979 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.090909091 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0454545455 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 5.21951772744 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0721590479729 0.243740707755 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0253233583534 0.0831039109588 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400320936244 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0362803794026 0.150359130593 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179071749166 0.0667264976115 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 100.480337079 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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