Nowadays, it has not been easy for people to find an appropriate job. Someone holds the belief that people should choose a permanent job to have a perfect work-life balance than changing it frequently. In my opinion, I partly agree with the mentioned above idea for some following reasons.
On the one hand, having a suitable job decision early and continuing doing it will bring about some merits as follows. Firstly, it helps people become masters in their fields. In fact, the sooner they have the career, the better their skill will be. As a result, they will easily complete their work and be more successful than others who change their jobs quickly. Secondly, they will earn much more money and have a more satisfying life if they have an early stable job. Take some billionaires in the world for example, they are likely to be very wealthy people when they started up their business very soon.
On the other hand, when people change their jobs more often, it also leads to lots of advantages. First of all, their lives can be better after having another work. The fact has shown that lots of people are under pressure at their workplaces because of the lack of interest. They, however, can find more good ideas in other aspects, their lives also have a cluster of great days after all. Moreover, people will have more experiences in many fields to tackle difficulties in life. In fact, when they do a wide range of jobs, their knowledge will be comprehensive. Therefore, they will always have a suitable solution for any problems happening in their lives.
In conclusion, I partly agree with the idea that people who choose a stable occupation early will have better lives than those who change it frequently. It is suggested that people should consider changing their job if they can not find any eagerness to do it.
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- The older people who need employment have to compete with younger ones What problems can this create What are some solutions 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, after all, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75786163522 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38330136378 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518867924528 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1347602503 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.0555555556 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2777777778 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310672061251 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10979745127 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712403498003 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231941822321 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082740939926 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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