some people think the increasing business and cultural contact between countries brings many positive effects Other say it causes the loss of national identities. Discuss on both sides and give your opinion.
With the advent of globalization, with robust communication and high-speed travel options boundaries between countries have reduced. This has led to exponential business growth and improved cross cultural exchange among countries. This may have many positive effects on their economy but some say that such proximities to various cultures may dilute national identities. In this essay, we shall look at both the aspects of this topic.
Global trade has improved the economic conditions of many developing countries with increase in jobs and opportunities for its citizens. people have varied choices in products and services. Moreover, MNC culture in the business horizon has improved the way people conduct businesses with International management practices. Also, efficiency in productivity can be achieved with globally certified techniques which are used in developed nations to maximize their produce.
Cultural exchange between countries have introduced various types of cuisine and food items. Brands like Mc Donalds, Pizza Hut, Dominos have thrived across countries and continents for their fast food offerings. This has also led to increase in obesity among kids and adults. Fast food culture has become a part of many which causes lifestyle related diseases. People these days find it fashionable to imitate the western world in terms of food habits and fashion sense. International movies and shows are also responsible for changing behavior among the youth, making them lose their identities while aping the western culture.
To conclude, global business and cultural exchange is essential for a country to progress in terms of expansion of their economies by creating jobs and opportunities for its people, but such a thing comes with a cost. Hence, its upto a nation to carefully imbibe their cultural values and traditions while embracing globalization.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...obs and opportunities for its citizens. people have varied choices in products and ser...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63157894737 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83128544752 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60701754386 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3095444653 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.3125 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203733519685 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657625092855 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507815827033 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121397025711 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394157215774 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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