Which one do you prefer? Why? 1) a company offering you a job with challenging and interesting projects but less vacation days or 2) another company offering you a job that is not so challenging and interesting but has more vacation days.
In the modern era, each individual's job plays a prominent role in his life. Jobs are supposed to pacify various needs and increase life satisfaction among people. There has been a long debate about the traits of a good job but this term has been vague for a long time. The controversial question which arises here is whether it is more beneficial to have a challenging job with fewer vacation days or it is more convenient to have a boring job which offers you more holidays. Although the second choice might seem tempting, I would definitely prefer to have an interesting job with less vacation days. In what follows, two elaborate reasons will vindicate my standpoint.
The first vital point to bear in mind is that having a demanding job gives me a great sense of self-efficacy. If I face various perplexing problems in my job and I can thrive to solve them, I will believe that I am beneficial for my company. This notion can have many fruitful effects. Self-confidence is noticeably affected by self-efficacy. On the other hand, a boring job will fail to satisfy my needs. If I am given a rudimentary task to do, I can easily lose my motivation and leave the job. According to the famous motivation theory, two types of motivations exist. The first group which is called motivators can increase satisfaction, however, the second group which is known as Hygienes can only decrease discontent. Having extended period of vacation is a Hygiene which cannot eradicate the detrimental effects of having an interesting job. To be more precise, not only can durable vacations not compensate for lack of need for innovation in a job, but also all the other factors will fail to carry out this task.
The second noteworthy reason is that since I am an extroverted person with a great sense of competition, having a challenging job is an indispensable part of my life. I like to compete with other companies in producing new products and thing about ingenious ways of solving a problem twenty-four seven. Moreover, I have a great tendency to work with other people and discuss my opinions. Also, I do believe that this strategy can help me to cultivate my knowledge in order to get a promotion. For instance, I used to work in a company for two years and I was a member of an adroit team. Our main responsibility was to develop a software program for the first time. Although this task seemed to torment, I really enjoyed working with other people and being able to state my opinion in group discussions. Also, these discussions gave the chance to cultivate my knowledge and come up with more sophisticated ideas every time.
To bring everything into conclusion, however it might seem preposterous, I like to have a more challenging vocation even if it has fewer off-days. This job can provide with great motivation. Moreover, challenging jobs give me the opportunity to make a team and cultivate my knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, really, second, so, as to, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 5.04856512141 337% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 22.412803532 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 30.3222958057 208% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 16.0 5.01324503311 319% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2408.0 1373.03311258 175% => OK
No of words: 502.0 270.72406181 185% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.796812749 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7334296765 4.04702891845 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92465015252 2.5805825403 113% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 145.348785872 178% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513944223108 0.540411800872 95% => OK
syllable_count: 780.3 419.366225166 186% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 3.25607064018 399% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 13.0662251656 207% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9456764178 49.2860985944 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1851851852 110.228320801 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5925925926 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06452816374 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 4.33554083885 507% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26005762465 0.272083759551 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640573492003 0.0996497079465 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07494765341 0.0662205650399 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172830412513 0.162205337803 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0943429613552 0.0443174109184 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.2367328918 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 63.6247240618 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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