As a result of tourism and the increasing number of people traveling, there is an growing demand for more flights.
What problems does this have on the environment?
What measures could be taken to solve the problems?
Traveling by plane plays an important role in tourism and traveling industry. However, it may lead to a number of problems on the ecology, when the demand for flights grows. This essay will consider these problems and suggest possible solutions.
Let us start with problems that an increase in flight may pose. The first problem is that it may cause a growth in carbon dioxide emission. The global warning will exacerbate at a faster rate, when the number of planes on the itinerary increases significantly. Another concern is that it can lead to nn increase in noise pollution. People, who live either near airports or on the way to the landing, will complain more, since the level of noise from airplanes will grow to the unbearable level. Furthermore, more natural habitat may go under airports. Governments will build more flight terminals to accommodate more flight, so they will occupy more wild areas for construction, which will result in a damage to the local ecosystem.
However, these problem cannot be solved, unless the state adopt the following measures. Firstly, scientists should develop airplanes running on alternative sources of energy. There are some prototypes of planes, which run on either sun or wind power, so airlines can replace traditional planes with environmentally friendly ones and save the planet from harmful gases in the future. Secondly, the developers should build aero stations in remote areas. To avoid problems with irritated people owing to roaring aeroplane engines, the builders should construct new airports in area in large distances from residential areas. Moreover, airports should also be built uninhabited areas pig lands. To protect wild animals and their natural habitat, the state should insist on choosing uninhabitable places for the construction of flight terminals, such as isolated islands and deserts, where animals are present in small numbers.
In conclusion, a rise in the number of flights due to growing interest in tourism and travel may create many problems, but it is possible to deal with them, if the government takes the above mentioned actions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 701, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'damage'.
Suggestion: damage
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Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'these problems'?
Suggestion: this problem; these problems
...e to the local ecosystem. However, these problem cannot be solved, unless the state adop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, as for, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28318584071 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72324913162 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613569321534 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6059410516 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192222996736 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589506837441 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447780049775 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118052423145 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558106028371 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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