Essay topics: Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is a widely held view that music, one of the greatest forms of art, is considered to be the bridge which can connect people of different nationalities and age groups. In my opinion, I agree that music is a good way to bring people together, however, I think that sports can do that in a better way.
First of all, music festivals are the best example to show how music can bring humans together. Regardless of nationality or religious beliefs, if someone loves music, then he can attend them. From my own experience, I have been in a huge music celebration like this and I felt that all of us were equal and same and that the love of music brought us closer.
Secondly, great bands from the past, like Rolling Stones and their influence in music still brings the older fans close to youngers. Several times I have seen in music stores old people telling stories to teenagers about concerts that they have been. This is how music is able to bring different age groups together.
However, the lack of frequent music festivals and the significant decline in the quality of songs today are the main reasons that I believe that sports bring people easier close. To explain that, almost every day international sports events are happening, such as Champions League in football and etc in others, events where it can be seen that there are people from all around the world.
In conclusion, both music and sports can unite people and bridge the gap between different cultures and age and are essential for our daily life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and are essential for our daily life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7063197026 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40436256762 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568773234201 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2545618789 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.090909091 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304942342922 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12919347903 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987049823918 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178304621343 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840864224737 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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