In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
The number of people who are suffering overweight problem, which is growing tremendously in different nations, as well as trend of healthy living and doing some exercise for keeping himself fit also descending. This is because of over consumption of fast food and sedentary lifestyle. And this problem can be solved by doing exercise and organizing some awareness programme to concern people about their health.
Nowadays people live on packaged food and plethora types of fry food, particularly, burger, french fry, cookies, ice-cream. This is because, whole day they busy in professional life or study, in addition they do not have enough time to prepare homemade food. However, some has time, but they are not used to make food, therefore, waste of time and exotic taste of fast food. Moreover, professional spend time in doing office work whole day and students are busy in classroom or attach with computer games, social media. Because of their quotidian lifestyle, hence exorbitant weight, health problems, bored and feel monotonous about their life. For instance, in western countries 80 percent young generations are not interest in their study, research, and always feel demotivate about their future. Needless to say, health is predominate factor of happiness otherwise people prolonging different detrimental issues in their life.
To solve this meticulous by doing exercise. In other words, if people lead their life according to direction of doctor, such as taking organic food, every day at least 30 minutes jogging or free hand exercise, furthermore, avoid fast food , drinks. More importantly, lead a stable and viable life and encourage people to follow all rules and regulations. Although people concern about their health, but government also arrange some public activities where people get tips, offer free healthy food and those leap redundant weight they stipulate other to obtain fit body. For example, different schools arrange self-awareness programme by doing play, short documentary, debate.
In conclusion, to mitigate this weight problems and having healthy life there is no other option, without exercise and eating balance food.
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also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1832.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45238095238 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.672488633 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8845741876 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9375 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188418983096 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681671039145 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597339549381 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122435557028 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520555543142 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.