In recent years, many small local shops have been closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping.
is this a positive or negative develpoment?
People, these days prefer to buy there daily elementary items to buy from gigantic shopping centers or malls. In my opinion, it is a positive development that can help the city council to renovate the local shops area and turn it into some residential complex or community center.
Firstly, I believe all of us feel elated if we can purchase all our daily products from one center. In addition, it will save numbers of productive hours that individuals waste in hopping from one shop to another in search of a variety of the items. However, it will raise the demand for the public transportation to commute to these centers. for example, Noida authority permitted to open new mall named "Mall of India" in the same sector where many other shopping centers existed but this change attracted more people to this mall because it has all famous and luxury brands at one place. In addition, all cheap wholesale marts are opened under one roof which provides more options to people.
Secondly, It is proved in scientific research that if we show more options to the human they tend to like more items. Furthermore, if customers will like more commodity they will be interested to take more in numbers, and therefore it will aggrandize the economic status of the shop owners. In a recent survey by The Hindu, it is shown that the number of people in the shopping marts is on the exponential rise which is impacting positively the sale of shops among businessman.
In conclusion, purchasing the dietary from once place can be beneficial in the long run as it can help in saving an enormous amount of time which an individual could use in other tasks. Also, It will ameliorate the economic standard of shopkeepers by selling a larger quantity of products.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 208, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'shops'' or 'shop's'?
Suggestion: shops'; shop's
... the city council to renovate the local shops area and turn it into some residential ...
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Line 3, column 344, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...sportation to commute to these centers. for example, Noida authority permitted to o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83498349835 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65414667049 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590759075908 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.0691053473 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.083333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171038210222 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569346194644 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624138009351 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095337755947 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056730021114 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.