You have bought a new camera but when you got it home you found it had some problems. You returned the camera and spoke to the company representative a week ago but the camera has still not been repaired.
Write a letter to the company. In your letter:
introduce yourself
explain the situation
say what action you would like the company to take
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to complain about Sony Px-345 camera. I have been an exultant customer for 4 years. Unfortunately, my new purchase from your downtown showroom was obnoxious because of some technical issue with the camera. I would like you to take immediate action on the service number: 78969.
Last week, I talked to Sony customer care and returned the camera at city center service center. Moreover, he told that they will respond to me within 3 working days but I didn't receive any update. At service care, they were able to identify the issue with the lens shutter as it was not closing. However, it is still not repaired and sitting at the workshop.
I would like you to replace or refund the full amount. I request the replacement by this weekend afterward I will be traveling out of the country for two months. If it is not possible please initiate the refund process to the card by which I made payment.
I am hoping that you will take prompt action against my complaint.
Yours FaithFully
Apoorva Chikara
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...spond to me within 3 working days but I didnt receive any update. At service care, th...
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Line 7, column 163, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ling out of the country for two months. If it is not possible please initiate the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72972972973 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47362124128 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681081081081 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.1513760255 44.8134815571 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.3076923077 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2307692308 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203871654791 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597759867249 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483368603639 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111164792028 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727991427801 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.