The chart below shows the amount of money per person per week spent on fast food in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods.
Write at least 150 words.
The given chart and graph indicate how much a person spends on fast foods per week in Britain and how many grammes o fast foods a person eats per week during 1970-1990.
As be seen from the bar chart, the high income and average income groups tend to eat more hamburgers. A person in these groups spends more than 40 pounds per week for hamburgers. Whereas, the most favorite fast food for a low income person is fish and chips with an expenditure of above 20 pounds a week.
In regard to the consumption, the quantity of hamburgers a person took per week increased gradually from below 100 grammes in 1970 to over 500 grammes in 1990. Likewise, there was a an stable rise of the amount of pizza consumed during the period. Starting at the around 300 grammes per week 1970, the figure for fish and chips declined marginally to approximately 200 grammes in 1985, then went up a bit to nearly 250 grammes in 1990.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
likewise, so, then, whereas, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 751.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49700598802 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40174258752 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586826347305 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9249295554 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.285714286 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265592010636 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119075729644 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103136501564 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20105058357 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108287871249 0.0819641961636 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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