The following table gives the statistics showing the aspects of quality of life in five countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table presents how quality of life in several countries though various criteria.
The USA had the highest GNP per head which was USD 13,160 in 1982, whilst the figures of those of Bolivia and Indonesia were USD 570 and USD 580, almost similar. Bangladesh took the lowest place at USD 140, just about a hundredth of the number that of the USA (nearly 100 times less than that of the USA)
In regards to daily calorie supply per head and life expectancy, the USA continued to take the lead with 3,652 calories and 74 years respectively. The rest countries were in same range and Egypt shows the greatest figures within the group.
In term of the infant mortality rate, Bangladesh and Bolivia showed the highest numbers of 132 and 124. Egypt and Indonesia were quite the same, while the USA showed an exceptional low figure of 12.
In summary, there was no doubt that the quality of life of the USA was really much better compared with other countries. In contrast, Bangladesh had many things to do to improve the quality of life of their people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: Regarding; With regard to
... 100 times less than that of the USA In regards to daily calorie supply per head and life ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, while, in contrast, in summary, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6577540107 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30527806513 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577540106952 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.8207865966 43.030603864 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.875 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0962514304959 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050550568439 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378199666843 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0644248092424 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456236110189 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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