Using the information in the diagram, write a description of how a refrigerator works.You may use your own knowledge or experience in addition to the diagram.

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Using the information in the diagram, write a description of how a refrigerator works.
You may use your own knowledge or experience in addition to the diagram.

The provided diagram illustrates the working process of a refrigerator.

Initially, a cool high-pressure liquid flows through the capillary tube, then it will be heated up by the evaporator heat from food within the refrigerator to become a warm low-pressure gas. In the next step, this gas continues its way to a compressor which will turn the warm low-pressure gas into a hot high-pressure gas. At this stage, the high temperature still remains and waits for the next step to be released.

In the second part of the process, the hot high-pressure gas will go to a condenser. The condenser which consists of a complicated network of tubes will act as an important part of the refrigerator to transfer the heat of the high-pressure gas into the atmosphere. After that, the cool high-pressure liquid will come out at the other side of the condenser and a new circle will be begin.

Overall, it is quite simple to imagine the way a standard refrigerator works. Nowadays, with the strong development of science and technology, we may see many types of more complex refrigerators in the daily life.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, second, so, still, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 186.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93548387097 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15283046225 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575268817204 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8629144553 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0545994448988 0.244688304435 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0321922997552 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369525869689 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0545468143966 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426840075004 0.056905535591 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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