Some people think that managers alone should make decisions in the company, while others think that employees should be involved in the decision-making process too. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
An organization is well-established as it has been contributed by excellent staff members. However, whether or not employees should be related to making decisions. The essay will present my view of the issue.
On the one hand, it has been thought that managers should decide by themselves because they have a large amount of knowledge, become familiar with the operating of a company, Besides, they know their staff’s strengths and weaknesses, which help them in the decision-making process. What is more, the method of accessing information sources comprehensively and completely is that workers cannot do due to high security, but administrators approach easily. Honestly, admins occupy a crucial position in a business requiring them having a lucid mind in any decision.
On the other hand, I have supposed that your voice should be heard. Because the development of a company brings myriad benefits to its employees, so staff would like to give a hand to their company. It has been proved by responsible and loyal workers when they feel of being respected and valued. Therefore, they will adhere to their company for a long time. Recent research has shown that to decline damages, a conglomerate should allow staff members relating to decisions. Some president’s mistakes could influence immediately workers. On top of that, if a journeyman is a part of the decision-making process, they would give recommendations fairly and accurately. Thus essential settlements, which not to require confidentially, referring to workers’ opinions become sound.
In conclusion, the referendum is very important. Managers should not decide on any problem when they not yet carefully think and sieve the ideas of many staff.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...ed by excellent staff members. However, whether or not employees should be related to making d...
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Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...amiliar with the operating of a company, Besides, they know their staff's st...
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Line 5, column 673, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... recommendations fairly and accurately. Thus essential settlements, which not to req...
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Line 7, column 149, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun staff seems to be countable; consider using: 'many staffs', 'many staves'.
Suggestion: many staffs; many staves
... carefully think and sieve the ideas of many staff.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, honestly, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, what is more, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41697416974 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26382042928 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638376383764 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.0623288606 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.75 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9375 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23957085756 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663850516156 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732310833517 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134923771421 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278183323622 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.