In some country young people are encouraged to work or travel for year between finishing high school and starting university studies
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
Undoubtedly, the pre-university year is regarded as one of the most shining and effective period in youngsters life that should be well-exploited. working in the year could help students to find out the requirements of work environment facilitating their choices for university classes and yet, there are drawbacks to be taken in account
On the one hand, experiencing the work fields or traveling prior to university admission is advantages. Firstly, young adults will encounter the exact needs of employment before joining the universities. this will help them to determine courses and classes that they must take during their university period, allowing them to reach their ultimate goals and find the suitable career. Secondly, traveling to foreign nations could bring about a lot of changes in their mentality. Personality and the way they think visiting another country, for instance, enables them to contact new cultures, lifestyle, and even new careers and opportunities that may not be existed in their home country. this,accordingly will open up new horizons making their university period a way to achieve their dreams
On the other hand, wasting a year after high school has drawbacks. one problem is that this period is considered critical in young adults life in which they may involve in actions that change their lifetopsy- turuy namely, crimes: for examples a study revealed that crime rate is 30% higher among students with a gap between school and university. Therefore, their careers will be permanently affected. another possible issue is that it could be just a waste of time delaying their university graduation. Consequently, they will lose a lot of opportunities to join the work forces as the market becomes more competitive with a lot of graduates every year
In conclusion, having a one- year gap prior to university could bring a lot of merits. However, a lot of youngsters may waste this year and even involve in actions againts law
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20189274448 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94609189488 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542586750789 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.3880808038 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.416666667 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4166666667 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.25 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169855227488 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615607488627 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446597222821 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110443551768 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277736828214 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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