You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
-introduce yourself
-explain what is wrong with the furniture
-say what action you would like the landlord to take
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ................. ,
Dear Sara,
I hope you are doing well with your new baby boy. I am sending this letter from Seattle, as I told you when we met at Sofia's party that I'm going with my husband and the twins to a luxury Cabin in the US.
I have to tell you, the place is awful and I'm still very upset about the living condition, especially the furniture. Can you image I found bed bugs in one of the twins' bed. it was pretty disgusting and we had to arrange for them to sleep on our bedroom floor. Not to mention the living room where the couch had wine stains all over it.
Anyway, Since we arrived late at night we had to stay the night. now we are having breakfast in a nice coffee shop and I already wrote a very angry letter to the landlord asking him for an immediate full refund of the amount we paid or I will go to the police.
Best Wishes,
Khawla
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-14 | Andi777 | 73 | view |
| 2019-12-14 | Ammu helen | 73 | view |
| 2019-11-01 | Singh@141088 | 73 | view |
| 2019-11-01 | Singh@141088 | 56 | view |
| 2019-10-14 | Tolik | 78 | view |
- You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter-introduce yourself-explain what is wrong with the furnit 73
- These days people are living into their 90s and beyond. As a result, there is increasing concern about care for the elderly.Do you think it is the responsibility of the family to care for their elderly members or should the government be held responsible? 67
- You have recently started work in new company. Write a letter to your friend.In the letter Explain why you change job, Describe your new job, Tell him your other news.You do NOT need to write any addresses.Begin your letter as follows: 73
- You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter-introduce yourself-explain what is wrong with the furnit 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ld you when we met at Sofias party that Im going with my husband and the twins to ...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e twins to a luxury Cabin in the US. I have to tell you, the place is awful an...
^
Line 5, column 44, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ave to tell you, the place is awful and Im still very upset about the living condi...
^^
Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...found bed bugs in one of the twins bed. it was pretty disgusting and we had to arr...
^^
Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Now
...late at night we had to stay the night. now we are having breakfast in a nice coffe...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 682.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.05952380952 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.9784840391 2.54303337028 78% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.702380952381 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9998789638 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7777777778 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162240446771 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584584520019 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631209339079 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109857854028 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756600157811 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.27 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.5 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.