You have recently started work in new company. Write a letter to your friend.
In the letter
Explain why you change job, Describe your new job, Tell him your other news.You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sara,
I hope you are doing well with your baby boy. I have an amazing new, I finally quit my job in the pharmaceutical industry and started my new job as a pharmacy manager in a small community pharmacy in the countryside. As you know, I spent five years working constantly without any bonuses or even a thank you note. Not to mention, the unhealthy and un-honest aggressive environment which drove me insane.
I have to tell you that I absolutely love my new job. I start at nine am where most of the morning patients are senior citizens with chronic conditions, so usually, I spend half an hour with every patient to go through each medicine. In the afternoon it gets quite where I drink my coffee and do the non-clinical part of the job. it is going great so far.
One more thing that I forgot to mention, I bought my dream car and I am pretty excited to take you out for dinner when you get the time.
Regards,
Lora
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sara, I hope you are doing well with your baby...
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Line 3, column 297, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... constantly without any bonuses or even a thank you note. Not to mention, the unhealthy...
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Line 5, column 331, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...nd do the non-clinical part of the job. it is going great so far. One more thi...
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Line 7, column 138, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u out for dinner when you get the time. Regards, Lora
^^^^^
Line 9, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ner when you get the time. Regards, Lora
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 766.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40229885057 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56463545181 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.67816091954 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3225093183 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1111111111 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239831574089 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872673142875 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855916914982 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151307192983 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752980756365 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.