You have recently started work in new company. Write a letter to your friend.
In the letter
Explain why you change job, Describe your new job, Tell him your other news.You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Mike,
Hope you are doing well. I would like to let you know that i have recently moved to a new company in Singapore , the reason I changed the job was basically due to the lack of exposure in my current role based in India.
The new job though challenging is basically a techno-commercial role for an electronic manufacturing company who have a regional office in Singapore and would like to expand their business in the asian countries,it will also offer international travel to South Asian countries with better perks, This will help me to gain exposure and strengthen my profile.
I forgot to tell you that i would also be going for a part-time master course in business management, it is a short-term course for 6 months which will help me to grow in my career as you are aware there is a lot of competition nowadays,the best you can do is keep on updating your skill set.
I would also start travelling for work from next month and would be sharing interesting stories regarding the new places i explore.
warm wishes
vinshu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Mike, Hope you are doing well. I would like to...
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...ntly moved to a new company in Singapore , the reason I changed the job was basica...
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...sure in my current role based in India. The new job though challenging is basica...
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...nd their business in the asian countries,it will also offer international travel to...
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... profile. I forgot to tell you that i would also be going for a part-time mas...
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...e there is a lot of competition nowadays,the best you can do is keep on updating you...
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... do is keep on updating your skill set. I would also start travelling for work f...
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...esting stories regarding the new places i explore. warm wishes vinshu
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...regarding the new places i explore. warm wishes vinshu
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Suggestion:
...he new places i explore. warm wishes vinshu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, regarding, so, then, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69189189189 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84365405179 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627027027027 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.517879947 44.8134815571 276% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.666666667 76.5299724578 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8333333333 16.8248392259 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187693752778 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866636671285 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560487682169 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111816334529 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607973215446 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 8.37731958763 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 70.7449484536 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.