You have recently started work in new company. Write a letter to your friend.
In the letter
Explain why you change job, Describe your new job, Tell him your other news.You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Tom,
Hope you are doing well. There is good news which I would like to share with you.
Recently, I joined a new job in London as a production manager in H&M organization and I will be responsible for men’s apparel division. Though, my last job was also in manufacturing line, I was not getting any salary hike for last two years and despite of raising the issue to my ex-manager and HR personnel, no one did pay heed to my rising requirements. In April’18, I applied for this position which was published in leading newspapers and on job website. After three rounds of interview, I was selected and offered a 50% hike from my last salary.
While on the joining day I felt nervous, probably changing environment was the prime factor but now I am quite familiar with the new environment and got acquainted with other colleagues whom I found very supportive. I have also been told by my manager not to be hesitant for inquiring about anything. Although, I have not yet started the work in full swing , it appears that it is going to be challenging in initial six months especially at the time of Christmas when lots of company place order for manufacturing.
In addition, I have also completed, part-time MBA and I scored A grade in three subjects and B+ grade in one. So now I am qualified management person.
Enough for now, waiting to hearing from your side.
Love,
TANA
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Tom, Hope you are doing well. There is good n...
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Line 4, column 356, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e not yet started the work in full swing , it appears that it is going to be chall...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 247.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67206477733 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84455730185 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65991902834 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.5643896262 44.8134815571 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1666666667 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124903053042 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428487938093 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378205547448 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759019139213 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476033891918 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.