Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

A travelling is a social activity, and there are two types of methods which about travelling.These are with by a tour guide and an another type is travelling an alone.Both of them have their advantages and disadvantages.

First of all, let's think second approach which doing it with a group and the tour guide.In the group activities there are several different types of people who have different abilities and behaviours.And, the person who joins a journey meets with these people.Meeting gives new experiences to people, and the group members improve their knowledges about new things.Some of these facilities would be a good and, but a few of them would be a bad, but people's thoughts about human developed by in the group travelling.

Also, places where visiting people are usually a new for visitors, and their areas such as palaces,parks,bridges etc. have various features.Although travellers have a guidebook which has information about environments they do not which places are more important and beautiful.So many information given by guide person in the travel, because these kind of people have more information than guide-book.

In addition, a schedule and places where visited by group are designed before the visiting, and Which places do they visit and when they go always known.This technique improves using time effectively and productively.And all visitors realize more things than first technique which done by alone.

In contrast, there are strict rules in the group travelling leading by guides, these sometimes bores people.Because, some members would not like some places in the schedule, some of them do not want wake early.And, a few parts of travellers want to travel alone, they want to be free.

In conclusion, there is one negative reason i definitely agree that statement, because there are several good reasons for travelling with people who not known before which leading by tour guide.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, such as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 308.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27922077922 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13435982344 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519480519481 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.1344086022 219% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.03646272 48.9658058833 235% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 232.285714286 100.406767564 231% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.0 20.6045352989 214% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.0 5.45110844103 275% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162630532896 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831243543471 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662347672241 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0958154621701 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624343806238 0.0645574589148 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.4 11.7677419355 216% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 26.82 58.1214874552 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 10.1575268817 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 10.002688172 310% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.0537634409 195% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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