You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
Say how the qualification helps your job or company.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to request a short leave for my ielts study.
I have informed you earlier that I am sitting for an ielts test on July 15th. As the test day is drawing near, I really need to focus on practicing and improving my English at least 2 weeks in advance. Therefore, I am requesting your permission to take a 14-day off starting from June 30th.
I promise that I will keep up with the company’s projects as soon as I return after the test. I commit to working two more extra hours after 5 pm every day to make sure that all unfinished work is done and you will not have to give me bonuses for doing this.
I believe that an ielts qualification will make me feel more confident to communicate with our clients. I will be able to fully understand their demand and increase their satisfaction. Since our office has only one representative, I can also be available to take his place if he is away for some personal reasons.
I hope that you would take my request into consideration.
I look forward to receiving your response soon.
Yours faithfully,
Truong Nguyen
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e to give me bonuses for doing this. I believe that an ielts qualification wil...
^
Line 9, column 105, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...fident to communicate with our clients. I will be able to fully understand their ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so, therefore, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.595 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74695740775 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9439034581 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5833333333 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213384657183 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067129904002 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490506532831 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09383479234 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374439685226 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.