The common perception about the cloth is very similar among all the people. Different cloth represent different character. So, the appearance is very important in our life. Even though this may not be ideal, our appearance often determines what people think about us and how they treat us. Some people believe and disagree with that we wear also influence our behavior. In my view, it does influence our behaviour for two reasons.
First, we choose cloth according to the occasion to represent and tell the custom, culture and values. For instance, If we had festivals,we would like choose vibrant and bright colorful dresses or traditional dress. because it represents happiness and it look more festive. If you not wear according to occasion, then you could not enjoy as a people wear according the the occasion because you would feel strange and crazy. In addition to this, When I got ready for work, I choose to wear formal clothing. While working, I often find that I am more serious than normal because the way I dressed. Sometimes, when I look at mirror, I find myself more focused in formal dresses. As you can see, the dresses that you wear do strongly impact on your behaviour.
Secondly, clothes not only influence ourself but it also influences what people think about you and how they treated you. If you wear strange clothes, people may stare or look at you as if you're crazy. For instance, I had a friend in university, she prefers very simple and formal dresses. All of classmate thinking that she is quite conservative, and she is not a fun loving person. One day we had a project together. It took about one week; So every day we had to work together. After a while, I realized I was wrong about her. After that I always talk to her. I know that if I had been more open to her, she would have felt more comfortable talking to me sooner. This incident taught me, the dress really does influence how people behave to you.
Form the above reasons and examples,i strongly believe that clothes do matter in people thinking and behaviour.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance, in addition, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71745152355 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49732785885 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520775623269 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 3.51792114695 313% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1992907712 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.12 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.44 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27346264236 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699057872261 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087299706537 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153678050782 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197150564394 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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