Some students have rented the apartment next to yours. Their parties are upsetting you, your family and other tenants.
Dear Sir/Madame, good afternoon
By this letter, I would request your actions on the following issue. A couple of students have dwelled close to our apartment two weeks ago. They produce a lot of noise behind permanent parties which they organize almost every evening. I was trying to negotiate the problem directly to them but faced to impolite behavior from their side.
Above all, these parties disturb me and my relatives such as wife and children because we cannot sleep well while loud music plays or somebody cries. Furthermost, I fill tired after that and get upset in terms of low productivity on the job. Moreover, my eldest son is going to have an exam at school, but a loud sound influences to him negatively. He is not able to concentrate effectively and I worry of a result he will show on an exam.
In those reasons, I would like to ask your help to investigate the problem more thoroughly and proceed with respective actions to reduce the parties. Unless I would complain to the police department directly if the situation does not change.
I am looking forward to your prompt response and truly believe in your further collaboration.
Yours faithfully,
Maxim Azmuka
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 319, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'influence'?
Suggestion: influence
...ave an exam at school, but a loud sound influences to him negatively. He is not able to co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86206896552 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69657530168 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.724137931034 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8700890896 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.25 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9166666667 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145704898523 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453018559339 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364969072375 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0582157970331 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466998845989 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.