study at home
In modern time, some people believe that children can be educated at home instead of attending school. In my opinion, while this tendency has some benefits, I would argue that there are far more drawbacks.
From an overall respective, the education children at home seem to be accepted simply because some children could receive good knowledge from their parents. To illustrates, nowadays, parents achieve a high level of education with master degree or PhD degree. Thus they would be able to provide their offspring useful lessons, skill, and directions like what they learn from school.
In spite of the argument above, I believe that this phenomenon is also negative for the following reasons. The first argument is that parents could not offer some value abilities for children like schools. Take an example, in my country, where schools provide children opportunities in order to do group activities as well as presentation in public which is important in the modern workplace. Therefore, studying at home with parents would limit the development of children, and this become disadvantaged compete for other students in the future. Equally important is that this trend would cause social problems for people in the long term. In evidence, children study at home have less social relationships because of a lack of chances to make friend and communication. Consequence, children would have less social interaction, and this would lead them into social isolation.
In conclusion, although I recognize the possible positive effects of this tendency, It seems to me that it is a negative development overall.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28404669261 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80948941682 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5953307393 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4857682378 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.461538462 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199915949407 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753039866282 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120917934196 0.0667982634062 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101918127229 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679315463917 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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