Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing this letter to express that I am unsatisfied with the decision to pull down art museum.
As you know, the building of museum is part of our district history, people in community are so proud of the building because people know and feel local history through it and it is the last historic building in this area . Each school organised the spring and autumn tour for their students from different class to explore the ancient and modern art here.
In the future, we could hire a professional team to run a tourism business. On the one hand, the money we saved would create a new fund to repaired museum, however, garnering more people here is the way to regain the business in this area. we might collect more money from tourist to save more fund for the future of the museum.
I hope you can consider my suggestion. that is the benefit not only for us but also for next generation.
I look forward to hearing you soon.
Kind regards.
Joe
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... the last historic building in this area . Each school organised the spring and au...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
... I hope you can consider my suggestion. that is the benefit not only for us but also...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 810.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60227272727 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36424308744 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664772727273 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5044713822 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171925365689 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543070248182 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423236403654 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882138192383 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395574206907 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.