For centuries, important part of the education have remained such as reading, writing and math. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skills be made as fourth skill to be added to the list. To what extent do you agree?
From the ancient times, language and math are the vital subjects in the education system. The invention of computers has allowed some people to believe that computers should be made as a part of primary school syllabus equivalent to math and others. In my opinion, I completely agree, as the use of computers is quite common in our daily life as well as its profits are remarkable to the society.
The prime reason to include computer skills as the fourth subject is the use of computers in our daily life. Almost every individual is using computer these days to make his life easy and to carry out daily tasks. Therefore it is essential to introduce computer skills as a primary subject. For instance, in majority of the countries, every office require computers to perform their daily jobs including budget preparations and presentations for sale. And even students are taking help of computers in their studies.
Another factor is the benefits to the society to make life easy and more productive, addition of such inventions have changed the modern world completely by its uses in multiple ways. Therefore it should be the part of primary school education to benefit the learner from initial stages of their career. For example, computes can do computations and calculations in a second rather than doing in manually and also with minimum chances of error, therefore increasing the speed of work with accuracy makes the life task simple and better for the world.
In conclusion, the creation of these programmed machines has expanded the opportunity of improvement and development for human beings in a number of ways, thus addition of such subjects in the school curriculum is pivotal for youngsters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02464788732 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71990347726 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556338028169 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6531233816 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.916666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235005060892 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858549168163 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559989506285 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137286346196 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302679402767 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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