You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes.
Write a letter to the community college. In your letter:
• say which advertisement you are answering
• describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about
• explain why you would be a suitable teacher
Dear Sir,
My name is Robin, and I am living in the same locality. I am writing this letter to you regarding the advertisement I saw about language teacher requirement during night timings in your community college in yesterday’s newspaper. As per my education is a concern, I have done my masters in the English language. Hence I decided to show my interest in the same.
I am expert in grammar and punctuations as I do have experience also in teaching English rules and grammar to secondary school students. These courses will help students in understanding the different rules in writing and speaking and may benefit them to improve their skills of the language.
Furthermore, I am currently working with secondary schools as a tutor, as mentioned earlier. The timings of school are morning hours, thus it will be convenient for me to join night classes and also this will support me financially. Therefore I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Robin.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...one my masters in the English language. Hence I decided to show my interest in the sa...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 234, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... also this will support me financially. Therefore I look forward to hearing from you. ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Robin.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, regarding, second, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08536585366 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02542271912 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640243902439 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6186456889 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 4.34317383033 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165783696913 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542810290397 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777399575465 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924378188671 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520385422736 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.