Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.
Agree/disagree
Relevant examples
I am convinced todays majority of the people choose certain jobs because of high wages instead of job satisfaction. Personally, I disagree with this statement as I believe enjoying the job you do is of significant importance.
First of all, if you are not happy at your work you cannot succeed. Money should be just a reward for a good work you do, and should come on second place while choosing a workplace.
There is many people doing them jobs because of the pay they get, but there is no excitement in that sort of way. Going every day on job you do not like and enjoy, might make you depressed and unhappy with you life.
Furthermore, if a person doesn't like the job, there is a higher risk of making mistakes, which can sometimes be dangerous for certain workplaces. For instance, imagine a nurse that finished nursing school by parents force. She start working at hospital at job she have no interest in. Would anyone be happy and feel safe is she is doing the job only because of high wages she receive.
It is obvious that if you love the job, you will more likely have a successful career and do your everyday tasks easily and with smile on your face. In certain jobs that mean being able to offer a great customer service, such as shops, restaurants, etc.
So,taking everything in consideration, I strongly believe that doing the job which suits you and you like , is well above beneficial than doing the job you hate,but have a big salary.
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...e beneficial than doing the job you hate,but have a big salary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, well, while, for instance, sort of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5572519084 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50607554487 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591603053435 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.523637285 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8461538462 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118471551103 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459798498597 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383510103755 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0706643001514 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418426358639 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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