Water pollution
Water is essential element of ecosystem.
Recently,water pollution became a bigger concern. Water pollution means poor water quality and can cause problems for animals and humans.
The most common cause of water pollution is industrial and human waste. There is also another cause such as oil spill. Improper disposal of toxic materials or garbage can lead to harming animals,plants,humans,etc.
Once water become polluted is unsafe for consuming. Polluted water can cause many different infections and diseases. Unfortunately,there is still some countries with no proper way of garbage disposal,those countries water is especially exposed.
In order to prevent water from pollution there is many factors that should be considered. Big factories and large building should dispose the waste properly and be aware of all dangerous consequences of inappropriate disposal.
People play big role in keeping water clear and safe. Therefore , people should maintain their cars and regularly check possible oil leaks. They should purchase environmentally friendly cleaning products. In addition to prevent this pollution problem people should use a reusable grocery bags rather than a plastic ones. With using environmentally friendly pesticides people will prevent possible toxic materials.
To put in simply,there is plenty of steps that can be taken to prevent water pollution.
Being aware of those dangerous sides can be a first step.
Water pollution is a serious problem that should not be ignored cause water is of life importance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, still, therefore, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66233766234 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26745745805 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601731601732 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9264927363 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.8421052632 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.1578947368 20.7667163134 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.10526315789 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.478450569182 0.244688304435 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173465776936 0.084324248473 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170356626026 0.0667982634062 255% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245669332551 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.160438964124 0.056905535591 282% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.66 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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