In this application, the author argues that the investment of a jazz music club in Monroe would get a lucrative profits in return due to the jazz music enviroment in Monroe. The author shows us that over 100,000 people joined the Monroe's Jazz music festival which held anually last year.There is also a top rated radio program named "Jazz Nightly" bordcasted in Monrore every weeknight. Besides. Lots of celebrited jazz musicians own homes in this place. Given the fact that the nearest jazz club is about over one-hour drive far away from Monroe, and the typical spending of a jazz fan is about 1,0...
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.0 out of 6
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 493 350
No. of Characters: 2240 1500
No. of Different Words: 200 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.712 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.544 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.277 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 126 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 90 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 58 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 40 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.65 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.972 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.377 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.553 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.173 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'profit'?
Suggestion: profit
...ic club in Monroe would get a lucrative profits in return due to the jazz music envirom...
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Line 1, column 288, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...c festival which held anually last year.There is also a top rated radio program named...
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Line 1, column 711, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
... club would be profitable in this place.While the assumption is problematic, there ar...
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Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s statement carefully. To begin with, there is not strong reasoning to prove t...
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Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...a popular local jazz music environment. As the author do not tell us how many loca...
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Line 3, column 543, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... In that wihtout knowing the percentage of local jazz fans who listen to the pr...
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Line 3, column 563, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...owing the percentage of local jazz fans who listen to the program, we could not ...
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Line 3, column 638, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun jazz seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much local jazz', 'a good deal of local jazz'.
Suggestion: much local jazz; a good deal of local jazz
...ld not get the conclusion the there are many local jazz in Monroe. Whats more, the average m...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...there are many local jazz in Monroe. Whats more, the average money that a typical ...
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Line 5, column 145, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nt that a jazz cube would be lucrative. Because the author does not tell us how much mo...
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Line 5, column 320, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Besides
...he tickets of a jzz festival and albums.Besides, without the number of local jazz music...
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Line 5, column 388, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
...of local jazz music fans, the income of the a jazz music club is not clear at all, le...
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Line 7, column 199, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... not prove the popular local jazz market , also It would not promise the profits o...
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Line 7, column 355, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...y would not live in Monroe quite often. Thus the reasoning of the celebrities homes ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, thus, while, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.6327345309 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 28.8173652695 94% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 55.5748502994 104% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 16.3942115768 91% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2306.0 2260.96107784 102% => OK
No of words: 490.0 441.139720559 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70612244898 5.12650576532 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.56307096286 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46587790427 2.78398813304 89% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 204.123752495 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.422448979592 0.468620217663 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 725.4 705.55239521 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.76447105788 103% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.22255489022 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.8473053892 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.1310749037 57.8364921388 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.368421053 119.503703932 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7894736842 23.324526521 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.70786347227 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.25449101796 266% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.20758483034 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28041247264 0.218282227539 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100906124181 0.0743258471296 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664710915213 0.0701772020484 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167976653371 0.128457276422 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643234101807 0.0628817314937 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.3799401198 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.3550499002 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.197005988 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.5979740519 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.32208582834 92% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 98.500998004 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.1389221557 108% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.