Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a controversial issue about the accessibility of health system. Some patients state that it should be accessible for all regardless of their financial state. This essay disagrees with their viewpoint.
Let us start with reasons why some patients think that patients should not be charged at hospitals. First of all, more people would receive medical therapy. It often happens that people, who cannot afford costly hospital treatment, die, but if the treatment were free, they would survive. Another reason is that the sick would be cured equally. Poor people would be cured as effectively as the wealth, if health care were available for all. Furthermore, fewer people would travel to other countries for high-quality medicine. People with deadly diseases would address to local health care, instead of visiting countries with highly qualified medical stuff as well as the state-of-the-art medical apparatus.
However, some doctors argue that medicine should be paid. They support this point of view by the following arguments. Firstly, free medical treatment would diminish the budget of hospitals significantly. Many health centers, which provide medicine for free, spend all their resources on patients, so they cannot install modern devices for effective treatment. Secondly, the country would not receive money from the taxation on medical service. Most governments, where medical system is unpaid, have large holes in the economy, but if medicine was paid, they would be able to increase the budget to develop other industries. Moreover, people would careless about their fitness. The number of patients would increase dramatically, if they attended hospitals freely, but with the expensive treatment, people are more likely to look after themselves more carefully.
In conclusion, even though some patients advocate the idea of free medicine, I think it is unreasonable to make it free of charge for the above mentioned reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, i think, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49169435216 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7234380113 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591362126246 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.1766879846 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8421052632 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.31578947368 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194110519865 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649858659218 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284565796079 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115667064734 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383623262595 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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