Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The cases of healty are priority each region in the world so that providing free healty is obligatory, although, that is not served in several advance treatments. I totally agree with this opinion because it gives easiness for society to access healty service, and it reduces risk of absence attendance at aschool and civil servant.
The main reason why I believe that easeness’s healt accessed by society might have probability to reduce various of diseases for certainly community for example ; poor communites can access to treat for risk of their potencial of cancer by free service at hospital. Moreover, if there is mentality of dieases like axienty, probably they might be able to take step to meet psycholog or psychiatrist to consult early warning before it has more giving effect for their mentality so that it is able to down their body.
Another reason why I support the notion free service even though in several segments of treatments are plusher than others are because risk of abasence attendance at school and civil servant is able to reduce by healthy people without getting dieases by early detecting, this step might have more beneficial for learner and worker to get knowledge more and more, and to serve one better and better, so that those might be up by significantly both of these aspects. Therefore, these allowed to them to get more to creat the best skill and to build much reward of salary.
In conclusion. I completely agree the free health for every coutries althouth some expensive treaments are because those give easiness accessed by society and when their body is healthy, it is able to make down risk of absence attendece and produces more productivity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97887323944 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58840371562 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566901408451 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 127.454648797 49.4020404114 258% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 202.0 106.682146367 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.5714285714 20.7667163134 195% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185219567479 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712639969852 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549930988149 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113018019301 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200023323282 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 13.0946893788 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ty are priority each region in the world so that providing free healty is obligat...
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... servant. The main reason why I believe that easeness’s healt accessed by societ...
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...robability to reduce various of diseases for certainly community for example ; p...
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...ility to reduce various of diseases for certainly community for example ; poor c...
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...mmunites can access to treat for risk of their potencial of cancer by free servic...
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...r by free service at hospital. Moreover, if there is mentality of dieases like ax...
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...t be able to take step to meet psycholog or psychiatrist to consult early warnin...
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... step to meet psycholog or psychiatrist to consult early warning before it has m...
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...eir body. Another reason why I support the notion free service even though in s...
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...hough in several segments of treatments are plusher than others are because risk...
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...vant is able to reduce by healthy people without getting dieases by early detecti...
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...d worker to get knowledge more and more, and to serve one better and better, so ...
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...owledge more and more, and to serve one better and better, so that those might ...
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...to serve one better and better, so that those might be up by significantly both...
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...r and better, so that those might be up by significantly both of these aspects....
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...ht be up by significantly both of these aspects. Therefore, these allowed to th...
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...both of these aspects. Therefore, these allowed to them to get more to creat the...
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...agree the free health for every coutries althouth some expensive treaments are be...
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...are because those give easiness accessed by society and when their body is healt...
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...because those give easiness accessed by society and when their body is healthy, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97887323944 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58840371562 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566901408451 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 127.454648797 49.4020404114 258% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 202.0 106.682146367 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.5714285714 20.7667163134 195% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185219567479 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712639969852 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549930988149 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113018019301 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200023323282 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 13.0946893788 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.