You have heard about plans to build new apartments in a public park near your home. You want to give your opinion about this.
Write a letter to the editor of your local newspaper. In your letter
Explain how you learnt about these plans
Say what you think of the park
Give our opinion on the plans
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Harry Martin, retired Army Officer living in Warwick colony. This morning, I read in community magazine about the plans of replacing public park in our colony with new apartments. I am writing this letter to express my opinion about the same.
This park is one of the valuable asset of our society. It is the only park within the twenty miles therefore, it is the place for recreational activities not only for local people but also for many others neighboring colonies. It has become the best-loved place for people of different age group. children love to play with their friends in this park and enjoy slides, see saws and other swings. Elderly people spent many hours reading newspaper and chatting with their friends seating beneath the shady trees or on the wooden benches. Moreover, many adults visit this park regularly to do jogging and other exercises. In short this park is a boon for localites.
As like many other people of our society, I believe that this plan of replacement would not be rational. People are more in need of public parks than apartments as there are plenty of other societies and apartments which are vacant from last many years.
I hope, through the power of your pen, you will bring our issues to the concerned authorities and they may reconsider this plan of constructing new apartments in place of park.
Your sincerely
Harry Martin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 298, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Children
...lace for people of different age group. children love to play with their friends in this...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 241.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87136929461 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45922656954 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609958506224 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0408544705 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8571428571 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2142857143 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204920942586 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711211373945 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689269650813 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132423536755 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073211716471 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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