You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager in this letter
Explain Why you want to take time off .
Give details of the amount of time you need.
Suggest how you work could be converted while you are away
Dear Sir/madam,
I am writing this letter to ask your permission to take a leave from work starting from 8th August. As you know that I am pursing my masters from XYZ university and my final exams are going to start so a week leave would allow me to complete my exams and I am hoping that you will grant my leave.
The reason for taking time off work is to prepare and set for my final exams which will begin from next week. I understand the inconvenience this might cause to you. But I can assure you that I will check the emails perhaps reply to some of them and be available for emergency phone calls from the office. Once I complete my exams and get back to the office. Moreover, I would endeavor to come into the office earlier than usual and work Sundays in order to catch up on anything I had missed.
Furthermore, I will talk to jack and he will share some of my responsibilities during my absence. I would really grateful if you could allow me the time off as it is really important for me complete my masters.
Looking forward to hear from a positive reply from you soon.
Yours sincerely
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...complete my masters. Looking forward to hear from a positive reply from you soon. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, really, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35885167464 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41957706041 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574162679426 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3228754986 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8181818182 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24837274572 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993341147525 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639584938738 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148630039385 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439952070266 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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