As countries develop, more and several people buy their cars and using them. Do you think the advantage for individual outweighs the disadvantages on the environment.?
In recent decades, due to the invention in the technology a number of cars are on the roads and people are using them for their personal benefits like for commuting and for some people it also acts as a source of income. In my opinion, the benefits of driving own vehicle are more than the environmental issues it brings. In this essay, we will discuss the benefits of using cars upon environment problem.
There are a plethora of reasons to clarify the view point that cars bring benefits over the environment. The first and foremost, owning a car will reduce the travelling time for most of the destination point such as workplace. A few years ago, people generally go by bus and wait for long hours for public transport. As a result, a significant number of people suffer to have family problems. However, with the help of cars. They can cover that long waiting and distances within a few minutes. Second on the list, a major number of male and females drive cars to give rides to other people who do not afford personal vehicle. For example, Uber and Lyft are nowadays in vogue to earn money to complete basic needs of their families. This means it acts as a source of income for vast number of people. Next to it, cars are the life saver for the humans. Because it provides the shelter in the bad weather like scorching heat, rainy seasons, snow storm and freezing cold. Otherwise, the unpredictable weather conditions can harm the individuals.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that the advantages are more than it's harmful impact on the environment. Cars are the basic need of every folk. No one can imagine their lives without having it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 323, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...han the environmental issues it brings. In this essay, we will discuss the benefit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70790378007 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51766470868 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584192439863 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0961934879 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1111111111 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61111111111 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253380374472 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658145998332 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539928797869 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173940702941 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442091475518 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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