In many nations, The wealthy are becoming wealthier and the destitute people are becoming more destitute. This essay shall analyse and discuss the causes and resolutions for the same.
To set in, the two primary reasons for why the affluent are getting richer and unprosperous are being poorer. The first cause is ‘education’ On one hand, the wealthy class people send their children to well known schools and colleges where they receive quality education ensuring their better career. On the other hand, the meager youngster do not get edification aid as their parents engage their descendants to labor at work for survival. The second reason is ‘opportunities’. Since the prosperous are educationally well qualified, they have plethora of job opportunities. Moreover, if the parents are, for instance, businessmen, the wealthy descendants get contingency to become more affluent by continuing the business. Whereas, the financially weak people loose chances to show and sell their talents and skills, such as art, singing, creative writing, since they do not have knowledge on how and where to expose them.
In addendum, there are two important gateways to the the above mentioned problem. The first is government support. The ruling body should motivate the helpless people to send their kids to school by providing free education with financial support to the family. Moreover, it should train the poor denizens, i.e, on modern methods of farming, so that they can work in a better way and uplift their financial condition. The second resolution is ‘awareness programme’. For example, the charitable organisations should encourage the destitute people to save gradually from their earning by educating them about the importance and benefits of funding. Such organisations should also inspire the elite people to donate for the welfare of the empty-handed.
To recapitulate, there although there are causes for why financially strong are getting stronger and the weak are becoming weaker, there are appealing solvents, too. In my opinion, every individual including government and associations must work together to solve the issue. I believe, this will certainly eliminate the financial inequality persisting between people.
- In many countries, the rich are becoming richer and poor are becoming poorer.Why is this a problem?What solutions are there to tackle this problem? 84
- In many countries, the rich are becoming richer and poor are becoming poorer.Why is this a problem?What solutions are there to tackle this problem? 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, second, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1926.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58260869565 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20859222435 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579710144928 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0064053898 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.368421053 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1578947368 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42105263158 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116337316823 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371505539412 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05170291501 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930046034182 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066339800128 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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