People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. what are these problems? Should government encourage people to move to smaller regional town?
In the current scenario, the drift of migration from country side to city side is gaining ground to search greener pastures. Therefore, citizens who lives in cities are facing myriad number of problems in their day-to-day life, which are articulated in the following paragraphs. Human beings should be fostered through various ways to live in rural areas by the local council.
Plethora of issues are occurred due to over exploitation of population in urban area. Firstly people are facing traffic congestion problem in the gigantic cities. To quote an example, folks who live in Ahmedabad are facing immediately traffic blockage woe during the pick hours, which can be considered as an epitome. secondly, mankind are suffering from health issues because of air, noise and, water pollution in cities. To cite an example, according to research of Waterloo university, renowned university of Canada, more than 50 per cent of people are having health in metro cities as compared to village.
To tackle this woe bureaucrats should motivate the local people to migrate into villages by offering various amenities such as, hight quality education and health services. Moreover authority should provide subsidise on agricultural gizmos in rural area. Not only these but also they should announced the special economic zone such as, mundra port for particular area to allure the people towards village.
To conclude, in mega cities, pots of problems are faced by the local populace, which can be resolved by migrating the people to country side with aid of conscious efforts of both government and individual as, prevention is better than cure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28244274809 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62498872718 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629770992366 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8388498561 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.333333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228479697618 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772700079917 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066392159923 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130152877925 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183400799984 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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