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The challenges people face when they go to live in other countries

The bar charts given below illustration the defiance people face when they go to alive in other states. It can be seen that the hugest defiance when people alive in other states for learning the local language occur to people over 55. Inverse of those, the smallest challenges happened in similar age for finding somewhere to live. It measured in percentage

Regarding to the data, starter from age 18-34 , making friend had the biggest challenges people face when their alive in other states. Followed by finding somewhere to live at 40% then less 30 % people in those age was learning the local language. That was smaller than which conducted by people at age 35-54, stood at 35%. But growth rapidly for people who making friends for 35% to 54% in age over 35. The top of challenge mong age 35 till 54 was founded somewhere to alive.

From age population over 55, a enourmous rise un challenges people face instant alive in different states from 29% in 18-34 age to 54% in age over 54 for learning the local speech. There was only one increase of challenges people face when they go to live in other countries than all, cause found somewhere to live and making friends had decline gradually amount of people who the aged begin from 18 to over 55 of almost half than percentage in early age

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ding to the data, starter from age 18-34 , making friend had the biggest challenge...
^^
Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... alive. From age population over 55, a enourmous rise un challenges people fac...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 965.302439024 141% => OK
No of words: 242.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61983471074 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.36387469014 2.65546596893 164% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520661157025 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 283.868780488 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5646592972 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267045661684 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137819791733 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120057794138 0.0843802449381 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214250127477 0.15604864568 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759803598618 0.0819641961636 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.2329268293 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 11.4140731707 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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