The tables below give the information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The tables illustrate the Fair trade commerce of coffee and bananas among five European countries in 1999 compare to 2004. Overall, it is evident that all the countries witnessed an increased on coffee selling during reported years. three countries (switzerland, the uk and belgium) saw significant inclined on selling of bananas. Meanwhile, Sweden and Denmark experienced the decline at the end of period.
In the initial years, switzerland had the highest number of coffee selling, accounted for 3 million, then increased twofold in the five following years (6 million). The figures for the United Kingdom and Denmark were almost half of switzerland’s (1.5 million and 1.8 million). following that, the uk observed sharply increase to more than thirteen times in the following year (20 million), when Denmark saw slightly increased to 2 million. The remaining countries (belgium and Denmark) had slight different on the number of coffee sale (1 and 0.8 million respectively). After which, it witnessed a small increased in the final year (0.7 and 0.5 million each).
At first, switzerland experienced the largest figure of banana commerce, then increased more than three times in the final year (47 million). The number of bananas selling in the uk was almost twice higher than belgium (1 and 0.6 million each), and those countries observed an increased almost same figure in the final year. On the other hand, Sweden and Denmark were two countries experienced decreased during the period. initially, the selling stood at 1.8 and 2 million each, then decreased just about half in 2004.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 965.302439024 138% => OK
No of words: 255.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20784313725 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74808241136 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494117647059 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.0 283.868780488 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8893807991 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.153846154 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107960746877 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495862042569 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839605749267 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899043202912 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570510180368 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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