Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
I strongly agree that, many nations are struggling foremost threat. Population is one of the major reason in rise of other two factors pollution and education. With the increase in inhabitants contamination and schooling are also increasing immensely. In this essay we will firstly discuss about the symptoms which can occur with the rise of these and secondly what step should be taken to control them.
To start with poor economy other than global warming is one major outcome of growth in society. They are two sides of one coin. Increase in population will increase demand for other stuff like housing, food and education. Demand will be more than supply hence things will become more expensive in future. In addition Many agriculture land use to will turn into high society that will lead to the change in environment. Air quality in many cities are turning hazardous, Delhi is one of the biggest example of this. Number of people use air purifier in their home to make air worth to breathe also the citizen of capital facing major health issue from birth like asthma.Children in future will start fighting with these from their childhood.
On the other part education is also other major factor hampered by rise in population. For example in near future no space will left in school and college for study. In today cut throat competition students are not able to get admission in the college reason being limited seats and also the expenditure is high. this competition is not restrict to higher education but kinder garden too are quite expensive. If government will not take a step toward stopping child birth, consequence could be more worst.
In this closure to make the society worth live in government should impose strict law toward child growth, increase in tree and plants growth and education should be free in most country. If population will control other two things will decrease.
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun agriculture seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much agriculture', 'a good deal of agriculture'.
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...ucation should be free in most country. If population will control other two thing...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.971875 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49583833298 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55625 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.143256199 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3888888889 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183456627791 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055104966875 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509247769518 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1146565205 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162848135549 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.