Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment,
but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
Now a days, People around the world experienced the climatic change in environment. You would come across the
news about high temperature and extreme cold weather in many countries. Scientist has warned about climate change
due to global warming and other reasons. Today's world not only facing challenges with environment changes but increase in
population and lack of education. These three, environment, population and education has inter-related.
Firstly, rapid increase in population all around the world leads to lack of fulfillment in education for people.
vice versa, un-education leads to increase in population. Awareness about current environment and
future environment changes being dumped due to un-education and huge population.
My country, India has world's second largest population. In next ten years, Water need for whole population is getting
difficult due to climatic change. Climatic changes due to de-forestation. Lack of forest reduce the purification of Air.
Polluted air makes people sick. Un-healthy people has less concentrate on education. Un-education leads to slow down in
economy development.
Education is the only possible way to overcome all the problems which going to arrive in near future. Once people of our
country gets education, they will start think about the country's development. Meanwhile people will get aware of current
environment changes and reasons for it. With the help of government and educated people, whole country population could be
warned about the environment changes and its consequences.
As conclusion, planting trees and growing it as forest. Forest gives solutions in the way of producing oxygen for human
consumption and reduces c2o level in atmosphere, which leads to air purification. Forest can gra the evaporated water from
the could and make it rain. Rain will gives enough water and water scarcity can be solved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, so, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 8.3376753507 372% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74394463668 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96708717072 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570934256055 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6783814102 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.1739130435 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5652173913 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.17391304348 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237154236084 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595315197915 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05835550923 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0671015537781 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056972023282 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.12 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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