Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Friends and the ability to establishing friendship play a key role in all aspects of each persons' lives. A controversial question which is often raised regarding this issue is whether keeping friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important and delightful or making many new friends easily. Some people possess the conviction that maintaining old relationships is more fruitful whereas others hold the opposite and allege that the ability to establishing new rapport is better. I personally contend that old friends are like jewelry and we can find nobody similar to them. To substantiate my point of view, the following paragraphs represent a cursory glance at the most outstanding reasons.
The first reason coming to mind to elucidate my standpoint is concerned with this issue that according to psychological point of view, people have usually have a dependence and tendency to with who they grow up. In other words, had you grown up and cultivated with a person or a special group, you would have a more intimate relationship with them than people whom you acquainted with in mature ages. The noteworthy statistics, revealed by a recent social research conducted in our country, shows that people who maintain their rapport with three or more old friends have been happier and pleasant and also successful than who have overlooked their old friends and commenced new relationships.
The second rationale behind this opinion is rooted in the fact that basically, thanks to the fact that old friends know the ethics and popularities and also families of each other, they could be more beneficial to their friends in tough situations than. Therefore, they can help their friends in coping with dilemmas and obstacles. On the other hand, new friendships, in most times, are based on working relationships. Thus, these relations are not stable and in many cases are casual. Take my personal experience as an example. I were unemployed and had some economical problems at a time interval. I were too anxious and angry that time. In this severe condition, just my old friends helped me to manage this harsh condition and solve my problems.
In conclusion, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons one can realize that although making new friends is good, they cannot be a replace for old friends. consequently, it is highly recommended that people keep their relationships with old friends. However, they should not forget the importance of establishing new rapports.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 210, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...sue is whether keeping friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is mo...
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Line 1, column 247, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...th a small number of people over a long period of time is more important and delightful or mak...
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Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind elucidating'.
Suggestion: mind elucidating
... reasons. The first reason coming to mind to elucidate my standpoint is concerned with this is...
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Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...ical point of view, people have usually have a dependence and tendency to with who t...
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Line 3, column 624, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: whom
...r and pleasant and also successful than who have overlooked their old friends and c...
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Line 5, column 532, Rule ID: PERS_PRONOUN_AGREEMENT_SENT_START[3]
Message: Did you mean 'was'?
Suggestion: was
...my personal experience as an example. I were unemployed and had some economical prob...
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Line 5, column 561, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...example. I were unemployed and had some economical problems at a time interval. I were too...
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Line 5, column 603, Rule ID: PERS_PRONOUN_AGREEMENT_SENT_START[3]
Message: Did you mean 'was'?
Suggestion: was
...onomical problems at a time interval. I were too anxious and angry that time. In thi...
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Line 7, column 134, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ing new friends is good, they cannot be a replace for old friends. consequently, it is hi...
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Line 7, column 161, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Consequently
...ey cannot be a replace for old friends. consequently, it is highly recommended that people k...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, look, regarding, second, so, therefore, thus, whereas, in conclusion, in many cases, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2110.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15892420538 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90797763971 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557457212714 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.263598726 48.9658058833 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.052631579 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5263157895 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.10526315789 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32505426916 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859347683169 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834632794486 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193282810135 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845275482965 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.