The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.

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The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.

The graph illustrates information about the number of junk food consumed which changes by teenagers in Australian between 1975 and 2000.

In 1975, the most popular junk food was fish and chips about a hundred times a year. This situation was very contrast by pizza and hamburgers which were around 5 times. However, the consumption of fish and chips became falling sharply approximately under 40 times in the beginning of 21th century even thought it ever was growing slightly from 1980 to 1985.

On the contrary, the other two types of junk food eaten by teenagers showed better track. Hamburger...

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