Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Others however believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In today's modern world, the declining health of the population has been a major concern, resulting in several debates on who should be responsible to prevent it. Some people believe that each member of the society should take care of its own health, while others that it should be governments action to maintain their nationals health and diet. This essay will discuss both views and will also state will I strongly believe that it is individuals action, however, the authorities have an essential role in it.
To begin, there is no doubt that it is a completely personal decision to follow a healthy way of life and a diet. Mature adults have the ability to avoid unhealthy junk food and prevent the youngers to eat them. However, it is evident that, unfortunately, the opposite happens. For instance, the vast majority of the population smoke numerous cigarettes daily, while the child obesity has increased by 45% during the last few decades.
That is why a part of the population claims that the government's involvement in public health is essential. Despite that, the authorities can not force the public to follow a more strict health life, because then they would violate the primary role of democracy. However, with several small actions can show them the negative consequences of their decisions. For instance, commercial spots on public TV channels and the radio to inform everyone regarding the harmful effects of smoking could alarm the smokers.
To conclude, definitely each person is responsible for its own health, but the role of the government to guide people to healthier living conditions is very important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, then, while, for instance, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08178438662 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69353366719 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602230483271 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3726196686 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.916666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270009202047 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798522218987 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107251303349 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140871636535 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118508897699 0.056905535591 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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