Some people think that it would be better for large companies and
industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centres.
Others believe that companies and industries should remain in
more urban areas.
Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you
chose that position. Support your point of view with details from
your own experiences, observations or reading.
Industrialization is a great threat posed to our earth as urban and rural areas have more number of industries and companies scattered around all corners. The increase in number of companies and industry, which leads to increase in pollution that in turn leads to global warming affecting earths atmosphere. Spread of Industrialization should be controlled by government bodies and should have frequent safety and standard check. In this essay, I argue to justify the fact that large companies and industry should be moved to rural areas.
Firstly, growth of industries, is because of the demand of growing needs of people around the world. People get occupied by surrounding themselves within modern day technological devices and materials. In order to cope up with high demands, industries are forced to be setup in urban areas to reduce transportation cost despite of the amount of pollution caused certain industries. For example, Leather industry release many harmful chemicals that dissipate into ground water spoiling the fertility and changing the chemical composition of good nutrients in soil and turns ground water into acidic form that cannot be utilized by humans and animals in urban areas with high population. Hence, industries and companies should be moved to rural areas.
Furthermore, Industries and companies, when moved to rural areas meagerly populated, can implement efficient disposal techniques and filteration methods to remove harmful chemicals from effluents and then disposed into air or water. But such techniques and methods demand lots of space that is possible only in less populated rural areas. Government should also check to ensure such industries are built away from human dwellings. For example, Reliance industries are located in rural areas across India.
To conclude, industries should be moved to rural areas, where humans don't dwell rather than building them in densely populated urban areas, that can pose a threat to atmosphere and humans.
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- Studying at a good overseas university is better than studying at a university in your own country. Choose whether you agree or disagree with this statement and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own exp 77
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 70, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...d be moved to rural areas, where humans dont dwell rather than building them in dens...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, well, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 8.36945812808 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 31.9359605911 166% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1207.87684729 140% => OK
No of words: 309.0 242.827586207 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46925566343 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82450306714 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566343042071 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 379.143842365 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2657508685 50.4703680194 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.714285714 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275517469761 0.242375264174 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102555790224 0.0925447433944 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755126040903 0.071462118173 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168714231004 0.151781067708 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058356306229 0.0609392437508 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 12.6369458128 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 55.0591133005 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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