Some people say that self-driving acrs will be a benefit to society, whole others believe they will cause more harm than good.
Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion using relevant examples.
Self-driven cars are increasingly produced now a days, due to the fact that it can benefit humans by giving more
control over their driving and avoid accidents due to unavoidable circumstances. Surely, self-driven cars will
benefit human society by reducing carless accidents and abiding by the traffic rules.
The fact about self-driven cars are that, they are programmed with certain protocols that will control all parts inside
the car and give us a more conrtrolled driving experience. In case of decision making, self-driven cars stick to their
protocols and avoid unfortunate events by halting or slowing down the car. At times, they also warn drivers about an incident
few seconds before it is about to happen. For example, Tesla,a well known manufacturer for self-driven cars has a proven record
of saving many cars from accidents.
However, some people criticize the idea of self-driven cars, as they are unaware about the caliber of artificial intelligence and
robotics. They think that humans can make decisions more accurately than any pre-programmed cars. This fact has been proved
wrong, since for ages by the overall studies that reveals the increase in number of accidents. Humans take wrong decisions
when they are in anger or in any emotional grip. For example, Hindu newspaper had an article with a bar chart that showed increase
in the number of deaths due to car accidents.
To conculde, self-driven cars are tested with thousands of scenarios, to avoid accidents and make appropriate decision under unavoidable
circumstances. Most of the accidents occur due to carlessness, anger or emotional swings that humans have by birth which is not in case of
self-driven cars as they follow protocols and programs binded with artificial intelligence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 282.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39361702128 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8868232198 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54609929078 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8094574116 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 7.25397266985 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.12807881773 388% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122441907488 0.242375264174 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518974362894 0.0925447433944 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444914608705 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0465904917347 0.151781067708 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409331216186 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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