Some people prefer to live in a house, while others think that there are more advantages to living in an apartment.
Are there more advantages than disadvantages to living in a house rather than in an apartment?
Although choice of living in a private house is thought by someone is preferable, other people consider that it can be more advantageous to choose an apartment. People can enjoy by walking on private territory through a beautiful garden and have in a house a lot of facilities and even own swimming pool but there are also drawbacks to be taken into account.
Firstly, one of benefits of people living in a house is that they have an opportunity to walk on fresh air and gardening that are both vital for good health. This also allows owners to grow up vegetables in natural ways. In other words exclude any chemical pesticides. Secondly, having a house is advantageous because people can place more rooms and put useful facilities. Many modern people lead healthy life style, so a house allows containing sports facilities, for example, indoor swimming pool. In addition, it is essential for children to grow up in favorable condition that impact in a positive way.
On the other hand, one of problems when people choose a house than an apartment is that living in a private house is potentially expensive. For example, buying an one-bedroom apartment is cheaper than even a small hose. As a result some people prefer living in an apartment because of cost. Another possible issue is that the time people spend cleaning a house can be very much because of a big amount of rooms and space. Living in an apartment can take less time for cleaning and gives opportunity to safe the time for pleasure activities.
In conclusion, while people can benefit from living in a house, it can also lead some problems compared to living in an apartment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79577464789 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6739891942 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514084507042 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2083857636 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2857142857 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404918888117 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145703888874 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126322750106 0.0667982634062 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256455124547 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656762369456 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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