Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.Use specific reasons and examples to support

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...king five days a week for shorter hours.I feel this way for three main reasons, w...
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...for doing things they like or should do.For instance, if I had a three days working...
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...b, I would spare my time for my hobbies.I would do sport, paint, shopping etc.I o...
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...s.I would do sport, paint, shopping etc.I often face time problem doing these thi...
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...e and being tired at the end of the day.Thus, people can spare their time for more t...
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...oint is that, people may need to find a part time job on the side.Working three days a we...
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...eed to find a part time job on the side.Working three days a week makes this possible.F...
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...g three days a week makes this possible.For example, when one of my cousins went to...
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...ound a job for working 3 days in a week.Then, she was faced with paying rent problem...
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... high prices in the city she was living.For this reason,she found a job for working...
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... the city she was living.For this reason,she found a job for working home office for...
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...job for working home office for a while.If she had a one job with 5 working days s...
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...time for another job to earn more money.Finally, working three days in a week may provi...
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...unities for financial problems. Thirdly,most people spend very limited time with the...
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...oved ones because of long working hours.Shortage on the work days help people spending m...
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...ing more time with the people they love.In addition to this, parents do not need a...
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...n addition to this, parents do not need a someone or a place for taking care of their chi...
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...place for taking care of their children.They may find opportunity to observing educa...
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...ucational development of their children.For example, I am working 5 days a week so ...
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... example, I am working 5 days a week so i see my son only in the evenings for a f...
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...or a few hours in a day except weekends.Another important thing is that i need hiring a...
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...eekends.Another important thing is that i need hiring a babysitter for him.This i...
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...that i need hiring a babysitter for him.This is a most common problem for mothers wh...
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...o consideration,it is more advantageous.It would provide people to spare their tim...
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...e to spare their time with their hobbies,their family or loved ones and some opportuni...
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... and some opportunities for a second job .I am of the opinion that it will be more...
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...nd some opportunities for a second job .I am of the opinion that it will be more ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, may, second, so, then, third, thirdly, thus, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, to begin with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2083.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 456.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56798245614 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67591939166 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.449561403509 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 634.5 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 76.0 20.1344086022 377% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 181.013274529 48.9658058833 370% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 347.166666667 100.406767564 346% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 76.0 20.6045352989 369% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.8333333333 5.45110844103 419% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.5376344086 542% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429935571219 0.236089414692 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.262608895812 0.076458572812 343% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115988102073 0.0737576698707 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30761080009 0.150856017488 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538200196803 0.0645574589148 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.1 11.7677419355 324% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.26 58.1214874552 19% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.6 10.1575268817 301% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.41 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.01818996416 125% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 32.4 10.0537634409 322% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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