The only way to solve the increasing crime rate of young offenders is to teach parents better parenting skills. To what extent do you agree?
It is irrefutable that the youngsters are more involved in law-breaking activities these days as a result, a significant number of individuals believe that guiding parents about parenting talent is the lone way to solve these problems. While it will help the society in controlling crime rates of teenagers as parents are more involved with their children, I am of the opinion that strictness in law and order is another way to minimize such cases.
Convincing youngsters is very easy especially when they are drug-addicted consequently, the benefit of this behaviour is taken by many gangsters who involve young individuals of the society to commit criminal activities for their personal goals, therefore, strict law and order to control such attitude is mandatory for the government to minimize the graph of crime level of youngsters. From the survey, drug trafficking involves mostly adolescents in India. Hence, stiffer rules will enforce the people to follow rules and teenagers would be away from such activities.
On the other hand, parent involvement is quite crucial and essential in developing children, thus educating parents on parenting is a good idea to limit youngsters from criminal activities. Guardians are the closed contact of children during their upbringing and pupils learn most of the activity from them, hence it is important that parent should keep eye on their kid's activity so that they can guide them right paths time to time. Accordingly, improving parenting is an effective way of decreasing illegal activities of their offspring.
In conclusion, although, educating guardian can restrict children from wrongdoing activities, the powerful statute is also the way to control the society criminal activities.
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Suggestion:
... illegal activities of their offspring. In conclusion, although, educating guard...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, consequently, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40808823529 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94183586358 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584558823529 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.3529552801 49.4020404114 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.444444444 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2222222222 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160634269077 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719757657502 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060414174345 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947110085561 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703066331268 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.69 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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