some people believe that when busy parents do not have time to spend with their kids, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games and sports. Other believe that it is best to use that time doing things related to schoolwork? which of the two approaches do you prefer?
Since the beginning of current century, our life has become so competitive. Although There is a growing consensus that the broad knowledge about multiple academic subjects has great benefits for the professional livelihood, there is a solid body of evidence that casts doubt on these beliefs. From a personal perspective, I believe that it is better to specialize in one specific major given that it gives the chance to accumulate knowledge, target accomplishment, and achieve success in one career. Below I will strive my supportive points in more details.
Firstly, provided that people focus on one specific subject, they can gain a profound understanding in this subject. The note worthy refreshing intelligible statistics, revealed by a recent survey conducted by Oxford university found that students who focus on one subject get higher grades than students study multiple subjects. Moreover, specializing in one major student can gain experience and skillfulness. Therefore, students who concentrate in one specific major can have a good careers and better social status in the future.
Next, coupled with accumulating knowledge, target accomplishment is another reason for the importance of focusing on one subject. Provided that people want to achieve am honor or invent, they should focus on studying one subject in order to achieve it. A vivid example can be given to shed light on what was elaborated above is the Egyptian American scientist Ahmed Zwail, he specialized in one subject and was awarded a Nobel prize for his work in the femtosecond; furthermore, he was the first Egyptian who earned this prize in the scientific field. Consequently, people who concentrate on specific major can achieve accomplishment.
Although the previous reasons are the first ones which across the mind with a glance, there are not the only available reasons. In fact, there is subtle point must be born in mind. Given that the job market has become very competitive so far, people should do well in their job in order to move forward. For example, engineers in the Silicon Valley who specialized in one specific major such as software or hardware can be promoted to better positions with better salaries. As a result, setting a goal in one specific field is very significance to achieve the career success.
Taking everything into a consideration, without a doubt specializing in one specific major has great benefits for professional livelihood and underestimating of these benefits in our life is not logical. It is suggested that schools design a new education program to help students to choose the career they want to specialize in.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, for example, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2219.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23349056604 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99697898057 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535377358491 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 711.0 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6705760946 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.789473684 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3157894737 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73684210526 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.040623132531 0.236089414692 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0147327037199 0.076458572812 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.019390334736 0.0737576698707 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0236408395342 0.150856017488 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185697765635 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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