An increasing number of people are buying what they need online.What are the advantages and disadvantages?
Nowadays many consumers purchasing products through e-commerce website is risen.In this essay showing the advantages of buying products from online are save time of people also discount on the product as well as there is some disadvantage also of online shopping.
Admittedly, there are some basic benefits of purchase goods and commodities by online.Firstly,Online stores save the time of consumers.Although these days everyone is busy with their hectic schedule on work or studies,Internet helps people to buy good products by comparing enormous quantities of things like clothes , electronic devices ,mobile phones to save public time and find them best product is they need.In addition to that,Second positive aspect of online shopping is providing huge amount of discount on the products.As instance,Many people want to save money and through company like Amazon Flipkart offers a great discounts on things with the guarantee helping people to saving money and as a result that people like to do online shopping more.
Nevertheless,despite the advantages above of online there is some downside too.First downside to online buyers is chances of deception through service.To illustrate this sometime is happening in their product is not delivered as the customer ordered Because of this squandering the money.Furthermore ,due to online marketing the number of local shopkeeper is anxious and they shut down their shops so destitute persons were affected to fulfil their needs.
To summarise,People are more like to do buying things from e-commerce website to save their time and great deals on products are the benefits as well as deception and anxiety in owner of shops are disadvantages of online.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, nevertheless, second, so, well, in addition, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48106060606 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26464169067 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 66.0 20.2975951904 325% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 211.530139696 49.4020404114 428% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 361.75 106.682146367 339% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 66.0 20.7667163134 318% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.75 7.06120827912 365% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141023339712 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936890014811 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0258772161247 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936890014811 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258772161247 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.4 13.0946893788 286% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -3.97 50.2224549098 -8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.2 11.3001002004 267% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.39 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.34 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.4 10.1190380762 281% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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